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Great story spoilt by the presentation,
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This review is from: Cold Rain (Kindle Edition)
This is a great story which could absolutely captivate you. I say "could" because in my case it didn't. My enjoyment was spoiled by the poor proof-reading of this ebook. Split words, split paragraphs, joined paragraphs which should be split. Linebreaks inserted willy-nilly. I had to concentrate so hard on who said what to whom, that I lost the plot so often it was hardly worth it. However, I did finished the book and I found the storyline very satisfying. Shame about the presentation.