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Not a great read,
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This review is from: Breathless (Jesse Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
The story premise is okay: nothing out of the ordinary but it has potential. However, the writing is shockingly poor with spelling and grammar mistakes, weak sentence structures and repetitive vocabulary. It just feels like it hasn't been checked. On top of that, the characters feel a bit flat and their actions don't always make sense.