A shaky start,
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This review is from: The Pyramid Builders (Lens of Time Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
I have just finished the final volume in this set of four. Getting past this first in the series was a close run thing.
I found the dialogue in volume 1 to be clumsy and unbelievable. Characters expressed undying love in terms which one might expect to find in a teenage magazine. The story, while not exactly high literature was, however, sufficiently gripping that I wanted to find out what happened and bought the other three books. Four stars on the strength of the improvement from volume 2 onwards.