3 of 3 people found the following review helpful
Needs a ruthless editor,
This review is from: Merry Baker: A Cyber Crime Thriller (Kindle Edition)
Having enjoyed the author's other books it was disappointing to see that this book is much less polished and less thought through. There are huge holes in the storyline, the dialogue is monotonic and unbelievable and there are grammatical and spelling mistakes on every page.
It feels like an unfinished, unedited earlier work being released to capitalize on his recent success. The general plot could be salvaged so I would suggest withdrawing it and spending some time rewriting the bulk of it.