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needs proof reading,
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This review is from: Flutter (My Blood Approves, Book 3) (Kindle Edition)
Number 3 in series was a good story and now its moving on you are getting to know the characters a little better and the story is deeper.
I still dont know what Alice looks like and I like to have images in my mind when I read about the people, all the others have a face explained but the main character is blank.
I hate all the little grammer mistakes still, if you scan read you may not notice as much but I like to really read a book.
Think I may take up proof reading!