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2.0 out of 5 stars Neglegible story, loads of bonkio!, 26 Mar. 2014
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This review is from: The Empress' New Clothes (Trek Mi Q'an, Book One) (Kindle Edition)
Potentially, this should have been a good read, for I like Sci-fi stories. However, this one had almost no story at all, and was simply a never ending description of kinky sex both between male and female and between females. It was so badly written, that one's mind started to wander to the poor grammar, and the incorrect use of the apostrophe in defining the singular possessive in nouns ending with a "s". It was wrong so many times that it became annoying, although I did note ONE correct use of a possessive ending with an "s". I understand that Sci-fi often extends beyond the laws of physics, but beyond the laws of genetics? If there was so much sex on this group of planets, why was there not a population explosion of nuclear proportions? Not very likely, even for Sci-fi!
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