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I hate it when words are there which should have been ...
on 23 November 2014
A bit clunky in parts and could have done with proof reading, I hate it when words are there which should have been deleted, normally you can work out that the author started along one line of thinking and then changed his or her mind but left an extraneous word behind, but there are just too many.
Also a grammar and spellcheck would have helped, indeed that alone would have got rid of the obvious problems.
That moan over it is a good yarn that gets over the gut wrench when you lose a friend, there one minute not the next. It gives a credible start and shows how the direction of a life can be changed from something as simple as being bored of waiting. In this case the hero was enlisting in one organisation but ended up in another because he had been left with no explanation for a long delay.
Written by a marine for marines it gives a good idea of the camaraderie in any service.