Top critical review
Better editing needed. Needs to feel less like fanfiction as well. Shame.
on 5 August 2014
I liked the fanfic writing of this author, but I do wish the editing was better on this book. For that reason I've dropped the rating.One glaring example was twice the word 'drug' was used when the correct grammar is 'dragged'.
Also, for some reason I ended up skimming the last third of the book. Something just didn't quite gel, and although I read it through to the end, I didn't get riveted to the final part of the story.
It was a shame, but somehow this just felt a bit too much like a fanficton, and not a work that you pay money to read.