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An uncomfortable read.
on 27 October 2014
So this is about a 31 year old dominant training a virgin very immature girl to be his sub.
I thought he was irresponsible. It angered me how he took advantage of a very inexperienced girl that seemed to flit from one teenage boy to another. At one point he refers to their relationship lasting 'forever' she told him she loved him and that seemed to give him a great opportunity to manipulate a teenager into doing a lot of things even an experienced grown women wouldn't consider.
Not only was this relationship unhealthy but the writer used some really cringe worthy descriptions of the anatomy.
For example. His penis was referred to as his 'meat stick' and the little teenager referred to him going down on her 'eat my muff burger'
Seriously. The little girl fancied pretty much every boy she met and constantly touched herself.. In the car park, next to her other teen friends and even in a room full of other mature adults.
SHE IS AN 18 year old girl- not even a mature worldly 18. She acted like a child, spoke like a child and I felt like she was being emotionally abused into doing things she didn't want