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Not as good as the reviews say
on 16 March 2014
I read a lot of books on kindle and this book is not as good as the customer reviews say it is. There are a lot of mistakes with grammar and dialogue is very bad at times.
The author writes dialogue in this book very badly at times, for example someone who is educated like a solicitor would not speak the way the author writes and words people wouldn't say in a sentence.
The story line is o.k nothing to hype about, Ive read better story lines although believable with relationship problems because even the best relationships have problems.
I think it could have been better, it was rushed in some parts too of the chapters, the author hasn't spent enough time with character building except for perhaps the main characters of the book and perhaps her goal was on those characters only in this book.
My reasons for three stars is because it does disappoint, there is a lot grammar and dialogue errors, the story not as strong and could be better, it was rushed in my opinion, the way the main character got her job in a solicitors firm not believable at all, things do not land in your lap as she wrote no matter how attractive you are, people have to work hard for gain anything in life, even models struggle, in five years separation of her home town and ex-boyfriend sounds like she was away for twenty years rather than only five years.
Disappointing and could have been better.