on 8 June 2015
This, a quite interesting story, is ruined by atrocious editing. It contains verb-free 'sentences', predictive text words that are not even a near miss.....and punctuation which applies no rule except that it is cast in with complete randomness. There is a passage of over fifty words, at one point, without any punctuation whatsoever!
I would recommend this book to English teachers who need marking practice. They could also give it to their lowest achievers, to make them feel better. OK; it was only 99p but it cost a bit of adrenaline