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1.0 out of 5 stars This is possibly the worst book I've ever read, 18 Dec 2013
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If you look through my reviews you will see that I rarely give a one star rating. I can normally see something good about most stories. However this doesn't have any redeeming features. The spelling and grammar are awful. I'd say this was written by a ten year old but my ten year old can write better sentences. The plot isn't much better. Descriptions are often basic at best. Sometimes it seems like the author has just given up part way through a sentence.

In fact this book reads like somebody has created a D&D style game and is playing it and writing down what happens as they play. In places you can almost hear the dice being thrown as one of our 'heroes' strikes at the enemy and misses or receives slight wound on the arm. Why we would need to know the exact number of coins found when looting a body I have no idea.

Do not buy this book!
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