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Was this proof read at all?
on 15 August 2013
Overall, not a bad story but l felt it was published before it was checked. The magician Arnold Trotter was mistakenly named Albert Trotter at one point, had me wondering if our author was watching Only Fools and Horses as he wrote this! Also, was it Halstead Prison or Halsom?
Sorry, l don't think I'll be reading anymore.