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3.0 out of 5 stars DISAPPOINTING ENDING, 13 Oct 2013
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This review is from: From the Fire - Episode 6: And the Ashes (Kindle Edition)
Having read all of the From the Fire episodes I was pleased to see that they got better as they progressed, but was very disappointed with The Ending. Perhaps the first five could have been made shorter, to give more room for a better ending.

Not impressed with the over complicated, flowery writing. Too many wasted paragraphs such as 'And then she fell into the black mercy of unknowing. Everything, every thought and every part of her turned to liquid and cascaded down into the darkness.' I ended up skipping many pages of such stuff.

I hope the author continues the story of Lacie and Sophie and tells us a bit more about what is happening elsewhere in the country. But please, keep the story moving..
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