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on 20 November 2013
I bought this book after reading the breif, but also the past customer comments which are always helpful. The story has a lot of potential but its not exactly a hidden gem of literature, and at times its terrible. The grammer and spelling mistakes in this book are incredible. Mr baker I would suggest you read your books bepfore you sign them of or get a better editor. I'm not having a go, its truly terrible at times.
Also the writing is very simple which is what makes the story both enjoyable and at time tedious. A lot of information is simply recycled over many chapters and there is very little conversation detail.
But I will be buying the second as like I wrote the story has a lot of potential and as long as the author puts a little more effort in and hires a new editor this series of books will be very popular.