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I wouldn't call these Alpha Males and the sex is not very erotic
on 26 May 2013
I downloaded this freebie because of the 'Alpha Male' in the title. I like an alpha male in a story but apart from the third story, I wouldn't really say any of these three males were alpha and although there is a warning for explicit erotic sex, I don't think it's that erotic.
Cozma - Straight-laced Susan is getting married tomorrow, and the last thing she has time to deal with is her whistling furnace. But when the cocky Romanian repairman, Cozma, arrives to Susan's condo, he persuades Susan to soften her ice queen exterior and allow him to ignite more than her pilot light. This was the shortest tale of the three but probably the one with the most dialogue between the pair but I was put off by the request to whistle!
Tommy - Chloe is a stay-at-home mom, disillusioned with the mundane, daily routine of managing her family's needs: cooking, cleaning, and grocery shopping. By chance, she stumbles upon an unusual new hobby -- a passion for re-carpeting the rooms in her house with Tommy, her carpet installation man -- who also helps rekindle the passion in her own bedroom. There is very little dialogue in this tale but rather than it be a one off, Chloe actually has a short lived affair with Tommy. This was probably the most erotic of the three as he uses a hoover part on her!!
Enzo - Vanessa is one of the richest entrepreneurs in Silicon Valley who loves her new luxurious pool, especially her ongoing rotation of young, handsome maintenance men. Nothing gives Vanessa more pleasure than luring unsuspecting workers away from their duties of pool maintenance and into escapades of casual sex. But soon, Vanessa will meet Enzo, one pool boy -- unlike all the others -- who will teach the temptress the pleasure of being tempted. Enzo is the most alpha in this tale. Vanessa likes to dominate her succession of young pool boys who she calls 'blue collar boys' but Enzo takes her by surprise when he dominates her.
There are more stories to come in another book, a teaser of which is added to the end of this book. Worth a read for a freebie.