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Where is the end
on 23 March 2013
I read the part four and found it to be good in the way the landscape and Citadel were described. The story went towards it's conclusion, with only 85% of the story read according to my Kindle, when it stopped. No ending, left several strands up in the air and me frustrated. If the aim was for the reader to think of the ending it did not work the strands were too far apart.
The other 15% were used for the start of another book.