Most helpful critical review
on 28 October 2014
I'm halfway through this book and I've got to say I find the writing quite poor in places. Sometimes a sentence doesn't seem to be a sentence for example. Also the way the writer talks about the main characters feelings seems a bit unrealistic too...I'm not a teen though and I wasn't a teen parent so I think maybe that's why I find it a bit rough. I don't know, I just found it all a bit unbelievable. Does someone who has just found out they're pregnant and been dumped by their apparent long term boyfriend find themselves falling for another guy about a week later?! I don't see it myself but maybe it's different for a teenager!