Top critical review
Would benefit from editing
on 26 April 2015
I'm afraid I didn't finish this book. As a fan of time-travel stories I thought the premise interesting. Anyhow, a time machine which travels in time AND place needs at least a little explanation, and there was none. Also there was no language barrier at all on the main character travelling back to medieval times, and the medieval characters' dialogue was too modern. The final straw was the poor grammar - whenever I read the dreaded 'he was sat .../she was stood ...' etc, then I find it hard to keep going, as I know that more poor grammar and unedited material is coming. It seemed like a children's book, and could be successful as such, if brought up to a professional standard with good editing.
Review of a preview copy from the publisher.