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Good story but could have been longer & better story
on 31 December 2012
I know I've only given it 3 stars but I did really enjoy the story and jack hunter was a sexy lead man. He's a Hollywood actor and secret Dom. When a plane crashes with him and jounalist Abbie , he takes charge and seems to know how to survive due to jungle training he took for a previous role.
I found it a tad far fetched he managed to crash land the plane, that he had a all purpose Swiss Army knife on his person (really on a US plane?), that he knew how to skn and cook a snake, knew a particular snake was dangerous and don't get me started on he knew how to make hammocks! But I did enjoy the jungle scenes ESP. The cave where he shows just how dominent he can be.
I felt when back in the US the story lost its way a little, the back story of Abbie being in danger just seems to go away, neatly, without any fights, just 1 scene where some one tries to force her into a car. It was too safe. Yes her apartment was broken into but she wasn't confronted? Why did the plane crash? Why did pilot die? Natural or did someone try to sabbatage the plane? Just way too many gaps, I do love a Dom/Sub relationship but the authors introduced what could have been a truly gritty, exciting story but it didn't go anywhere. Not sure if publishers rushed them or said do me a "fifty shades" story and that's all they cared about. I feel the authors could have done more with the story, I feel they probably wanted to.
So I did love th D & S side and introduction to that world but hmm felt short changed. I like a good story with hot sex, not one or the other.