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Send in the grammar police!
on 26 November 2013
I finished this book, but only becuase I was too lazy to find another book to read. What a waste of time - I do feel bad saying this, obviously the author put a lot of work into it (I assume, although she could have hashed it out in a day it seems), but the lack of grammar - especially commas - was infuriating! I kept having to re-read sentences becuase the grammar was wrong, so they didn't make sense.
The plot was dire, ridiculous and eye-rolling. You didn't feel much sympathy for Judy, just wanted to give her a good shake.
The book was full of waffle and unneccesary dialogue and basically just descriptions of what was happening - not told like a story should be, like 'I went to the shop then I went home then my baby was born'.
I wouldn't recommend it, apart from as an example of how important correct grammar is..!