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Wouldn't waste your money
on 21 November 2013
I got the first book in this series as it was free.
Honestly the only reason I even paid for this was that I thought the story may get better as it went along.... I was sadly mistaken.
The plot is rather thin, the main character Sarah doesn't seem to have a back bone and lets Joshua walk all over her. There is very little back story to either of the characters, and honestly a lot of the storyline is just unrealistic. For example in book one Sarah mentions she raised her brothers after her parents died. In any of the books there is very little mention of them. Sarah flies off to Dubai and it is seemingly as though her brothers no long exist. And while they may have grown up and living their own lives, honestly can you say if you had done the same, you would all of a sudden have very little contact with them?
The parts of each book that descibe the 'sex scenes', honestly, all felt like I was simply reading the same scene over and over. Completely forgettable.
However that being said the BIGGEST issue I had with this book was the length. I actually paid for every book in the series (I honestly think I was having a moment of insanity, either that or it was wishful thinking). All the books are so short, especially so when you factor in what they each cost. I literally finished them all within 3 hours.
In my opinion there are far better books out there that are free and better written.