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Nice idea - poor execution
on 22 April 2013
Was excited to find another paranormal author with a few novels available, but then very disappointed. The basic idea of this is interesting - nearly parallel worlds, vampire hunters, etc. However, for me, the negatives outweigh the interesting core idea. I personally really struggled with the poor grammar - changing tenses mid-sentence for example, and not just once - and the clumsy plotting. It was far, far too long and would have benefited from some really serious editing both in terms of length (it could have done to be about half the length) and also plotting (there was so much detail going on it was virtually impossible to work out as a reader what was important and what not). I only made it about a third of the way through before giving up. Over time I'm sure that the author will refine her work, and hopefully the interesting core ideas will be more evident, however I for one will not be reading it.