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4.0 out of 5 stars Very Creepy
This was an excellent story - I found it very creepy, with a real sense of the terror that the main character, Alle, was feeling. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and will now take a look at other works by the author.
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3.0 out of 5 stars Interesting idea, wooden prose
Pros: The premise of the story was interesting, and some of the scenes built up nice tension

but

Cons: the prose was awkward and wooden (just one very obvious example was pairing the noun "heat" with the adjective "hot" twice... in the same paragraph. Yes, heat does often tend to be hot!). Other scenes were very flat, but I suspect that the prose...
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4.0 out of 5 stars Very Creepy, 30 Sep 2013
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This was an excellent story - I found it very creepy, with a real sense of the terror that the main character, Alle, was feeling. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and will now take a look at other works by the author.
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3.0 out of 5 stars Interesting idea, wooden prose, 20 Oct 2012
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Pros: The premise of the story was interesting, and some of the scenes built up nice tension

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Cons: the prose was awkward and wooden (just one very obvious example was pairing the noun "heat" with the adjective "hot" twice... in the same paragraph. Yes, heat does often tend to be hot!). Other scenes were very flat, but I suspect that the prose was to blame. Also the idea behind the story could have been developed much more interestingly in other ways than the author chose.

Worth reading? Ray Bradbury it ain't, but it's probably above the median point of self published short horror on kindle. So if you're an avid indie short horror kindler, then not bad for 77p
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