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on 8 April 2012
Owing to the numerous gramatical errors, combined with wrongly placed words, and even words that have been typed twice side by side, i have been forced to give this 3 stars. This is a shame really, as the concept for this book is good, the action goes along at a good pace, and the characters are well described. Some proffesional editing, and this could be a very good book indeed.