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A Cornish Christmas-Disappointed with this read.
on 6 August 2012
This short story was amaturish and easily predictable. I am not a writer but I am sure that I could have written this within a few days. The simplest of boy meets girl love stories with no real added features of note or to capture the imagination and a very abrupt ending. Thank goodness it didn't cost very much.