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Kind of disappointed..
on 21 February 2012
Yes, this book has hot guys and the premise certainly does have potential but the writing lets it down.
For me, the book just didn't flow. I can forgive some spelling mistakes but one moment the herione would be in one position and then in the next, she would be across the room. I had quite a few 'huh?' moments and had to keep re-reading paragraphs to see if I had got it wrong (I hadn't). Also, something major would happen, a chase for instance and in the next chapter it would all be forgotten about, almost as if a full chapter was missing.
Even though this only cost me a quid I'm slightly peeved that I wasted the time reading it when I could have been reading something else. However, if the author had a better editor then it could be good. The heroine was indeed likeable and it does have...something new and refreshing about it. Sadly, for me, I just can't get past the points I have made above to continue, it just wasn't for me.