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on 8 January 2012
I downloaded this for free thinking I was getting the first book in a series entitled, "Bitten;" however, it is not Book One (as advertised) but more of a couple of chapters to a full length story. A straight forward description would help since it left me feeling cheated with the hurried pace and forced ending.

This story started off with great promise as we are introduced to Ally, a confident young woman (25) who is looking forward to celebrating Halloween as a newly single girl. She finds herself attracted to a mysterious male at the club she attends with her two best friends. I found Ally to be interesting but was not feeling the love between the 3 friends. Ally spent more time complaining about them then bonding. Also, the eternal love felt by Ally and Ben was too quick and unbelievable, especially for Ally who didn't miss a single beat after breaking up with a boyfriend of 8 months. Perhaps this brief sample didn't allow for any other option but it felt too hurried to be a good story.

Will I read the Bitten Series? I might give it a try if the price was right and the author fulfills the flashes of promise offered here. There were several interesting threads (did Ally know Ben prior to this night? How does transformation take place? etc) but please, pretty please, stop telling us how vampire marriages are like being married to a sibling!
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on 8 January 2013
I didn't find this book interesting at all. It is 100 pages that have not been properly developed. If the book had been longer, a normal size then I think this story could turn in to something but at the moment it has no substance to it. I give this 1 star and in need of some serious improvement.
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on 19 March 2013
I like the way that the author has adapted the mythology of humans being attracted to the beauty of vampires, being an avid fan of the paranormal it's interesting to see the flipside
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on 20 January 2014
That was a very short story, I really liked it and I think it said that there is a second book,
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on 22 February 2014
this was the greatest waste of my time it only took me about an hour to read the whole thing and even at that i skipped pages in it an hour of my life im not gonna get back was wasted on this book i tried reading the second book but gave up 10 pages into it im now officially turned off short stories and this isent the first bad one iv read
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on 18 October 2015
glad I bought it enjoyed it
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on 6 August 2015
Great little read. 😃
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on 27 May 2015
Good book
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