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Meandering plot, awful dialgue and boring
on 2 May 2013
I thought the first book in this series was ok, so the sequel was a dissapointment. Following none of the characters from the first book (only cameos), the new characters introduced are dull and pretty unlikeable. The plot takes a long time to get going and the pacing is stuttering. Dialogue, both external and internal is cliched and cringeworthy. The author also likes to provide plenty of dull information about equopment and training, sometimes in the middle of the action. There is action spattered through the book but none of it has any weight, perhaps because you don't sympathise with the characters involved. Ultimately I found this boring and cringeworthy to the point it was a chore to finish.