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Shocking punctuation and spelling but an amusing read
on 8 August 2014
The story line is informative and enjoyable. Highlighting the problems of arranged marriage quite well although in a somewhat shallow way. HOWEVER.... It has a strong feeling of having been written by a complete amateur, someone who has little knowledge of writing. It appears not to have been proof read even once and is riddled with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. This means that at times you have to read a sentence twice to get the correct meaning. I enjoyed it and read it in 2 evenings though I would suggest that perhaps the writer would benefit from some education before she embarks on another book! It gets 3 stars purely because as previously mentioned, it was fairly entertaining read.