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Confusing and incoherent - could use an editor
on 28 December 2011
This book was just too jumbled and confusing for me. It jumped from one incoherent scene to the next and before I even knew who the characters were or what was happening we were in the middle of true love.
I felt as if I kept on missing chapters and could never really connect with the heroine. Even the emotional flow of the story was off, one minute it would be dramatic, and then suddenly jump to a completely different emotion and then be somewhere else, all within the same few pages.
I did not even get to the end of this book. It felt like something written by either a very young or very inexperienced author.