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Short and disappointing
on 21 December 2011
This book has everything it needs to become a fantastic book, however it feels like the author didn't spend enough time as it was very short took me about 15 minutes for me to read it. It needs more character development and elaboration of the plot but the worst thing about it was the fact it could have been great if the author spent the time to expand it thoroughly. It should be sold as a short story or a novella- not misleading the reader to thinking it is getting a full on book.