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So much wasted potential
on 3 March 2014
I love you, lets have sex. I hate you, lets have sex. It's Thursday, lets have sex. Yep that pretty much sums up their relationship. Not forgetting every time they did have sex, it was multiple orgasm overkill. One thing that did make me laugh, rather than swoon, was Dominic was a quick finisher...it's not a race Dominic lol
The mafia storyline was ridiculous.
At the end of book 1, there was an excerpt from book 2, yet that's not what started book 2 off. The excerpt was quite near the end of book 2....I've never come across that before in a book.
The books I normally read are written in one of the lead character's POV and the way this book was written in the 3rd person just added to the confusion in the book. A lot of the time, I had to flick back to see if I had missed something, but no I hadn't.
This book just isn't gripping me. I normally will read a book this size in one or two sittings, but it's taking me a few days to get through it. "Getting through" a book isn't the idea. The idea of a book is to grab your attention, have you on the edge of your seat so you don't want to put it down. Sadly this missed the mark for me.