Top critical review
Nice story but in need of a professional edit!
on 1 January 2016
This is a nice little book and definitely an interesting read for anyone interested in cycle touring.
I love how Andy was so honest about the less glamorous and fun parts of the trip, and especially about his changing feelings towards Tom.
Having said all this, it's pretty clear that this a self-published book. There are a fair few errors - spelling, wrong word use etc. and unfortunately these detract from the writing.
The story is also fairly drawn out and I think it would benefit from a much stricter editing process. This became less of an issue towards Georgia but after Armenia the story meandered around then abruptly stopped (and the outro).
Overall - worth a read if you're interested in a trip of your own or have read Janapar!