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So much is wrong with this book.
on 3 June 2014
The first 10 chapters or so are pretty terrible and were a struggle to get through. It did get marginally better after those- once all the tedious and unnecessary descriptions of room decor, character appearance, activities and background were mostly done with. I found the werewolf thing quite interesting and though I couldn't get my head around the relationship between Fane and Jacque (it struck me at times as more than a little unhealthy), it was sweet. But the writing throughout isn't great. Spelling, grammar and punctuation were cringe-worthy sloppy. And there was major repetition of information. Some- and I mean SOME- of the dialogue was kind of witty, but a lot of it felt wooden, unbelievable and entirely irrelevant. The book really could have benefited from more editing and would have probably come out half as long for it.