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Into The Abyss (Demons of Astlan Book 1) by J. Langland
1 of 2 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars could been lot better., 3 July 2014
Some liked some didn't for 1 thought was a bit too long but did like the idea of story always interested in Angel demon story's sort of thing as long not strong romance mainly ones and this certainly was not that at least and humor did not work for me unfunfortunately.
Magic systems was not badly done and character's in hear ok for most part, found Takarius the knight constant moaning about Melissance girl and bit annoying after a while tho, and that found very annoying and frustrating was Tom's cconstant need for Rupert when he's not there with him it's like were is rupert whats Rupert doing ectra found this extremely annoying and to drag the story and tom's character down hugly, I… Read more