I couldn't get through it, there are a lot of spelling mistakes in the sample e.g. "The Vampire was going to kill my mother but when my father showed up he kill him instead and turned my mother into a vampire."
Surely the editor would have noticed this mistake? I stopped reading there and deleted it off my kindle. It's all telling not showing.
It is really good the only problem I have with it is if it gets on my skin I come out in spots straight away and sometimes leaves me a tad itchy. It also greyed my hair slightly so I am going to redye it.
But despite that this product is really good at keeping the flakes at bay for a day or two., no itching as well which means no hair pulling. I will buy the bigger bottle next time.