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2.0 out of 5 stars
Disappointingly immature, 4 Nov 2012
I'm sorry Mr McDowall but the first chapter is poorly written. I must assume it is written by a fairly young person. I wonder if its audience is meant to be young also? If it is, indeed written by a young person then it is not a bad start to a writing career.