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4.0 out of 5 stars
Good read, annoying, lazy layout, 7 Nov 2012
Enjoying the plot(s), but the lack of clear paragraphs when changing scene is really annoying. There are two different story lines going on at the same time, with totally different characters, and this lack of definition/paragraphs makes it difficult to follow. I had to keep going back a line or two to regain focus. Spoiling a good book. Lazy transcription into an ebook.