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Grimm's Fairy Stories
Grimm's Fairy Stories
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5.0 out of 5 stars Enjoyable classics, 14 Aug 2014
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Love the availability of classics such as these. Some of stories within I was completely unfamiliar with. Sure they're dated, but therein lies the charm. Great for adults and children alike, though not too young on the latter unless you're reading and ready to explain or reassure!


Captured by Cavemen
Captured by Cavemen
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4.0 out of 5 stars Something a little different, 1 Aug 2014
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First part of longer story, but still includes some depth and several chapters. Well written, interesting and fun.
Note, I "bought" this while it was free; looking at the price of the sequels, I wouldn't rate it so highly if it was priced similarly. For the same reason, I haven't been tempted to read the rest of the story (and have docked it one star)


25 True Dogging Stories
25 True Dogging Stories
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1.0 out of 5 stars Too tame, too short, 1 Aug 2014
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Mainly unerotic first person character pieces, often too conversational and little more than a shaggy dog story. Some rise above the rest, but still not to high levels. Don't expect anything too explicit - or long either, since some are under 1 page long.
This doesn't benefit from being marketed as erotica; it is far from that. It is a collection of fictitious short anecdotes lacking any depth to story or character that might be compiled into a TV documentary on dogging (suitable for immediately after the watershed).


Two Men for Me (bisexual threesome menage MF MM MMF erotic romance) (Mrs Harper's Valleys Book 1)
Two Men for Me (bisexual threesome menage MF MM MMF erotic romance) (Mrs Harper's Valleys Book 1)
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2.0 out of 5 stars Ruined by its editing, 16 April 2014
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This is not a bad book, just so poorly edited as to be hard to read, in particular, the dialogue. Often multiple speakers are in the same paragraph, then as the story progresses, a new pattern develops of 'X said,' then the dialogue follows in a new paragraph. Generally the prose is good away from any dialogue, though sometimes extends beyond the whole Kindle page and thoughts can be repetitive.
Apart from that, we have a fairly hot, if unconvincing bisexual (MMF) short story. Do I recommend it? Depends how patient you're feeling. I wouldn't read it again.


Sexy Slumber Party: A Group Sex Erotica Story
Sexy Slumber Party: A Group Sex Erotica Story
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2.0 out of 5 stars Half a story, 7 Mar 2014
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I love truth or dare; it is a great device in stories. Despite its short length (nothing wrong with that), this spends,a long time building the dares up, at one point all the girls taking turns to do the same dare. But then, trying not to give too much away, it stops with the next step and we are presented with a brief plan of what the girls intend to do next and what might happen when it gets back round to the central girl in the story.
One of those stories that is uncomfortably close to implying girls younger than eighteen (since all are so unbelievably innocent). There also seems a bizarre and incongruous play on the identity of the neighbour who joins them: "Rex" has very few lines and doesn't get any say in the truths or dares despite being close to them, is known as "Dog", growls and has shaggy hair!?!
So to sum up (and this review is becoming almost as long as the book), I felt uncomfortable at times during and cheated by the premature ending.


Cuckolded On My Wedding Night
Cuckolded On My Wedding Night
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2.0 out of 5 stars "Cuckolded on My Honeymoon and After" would be more accurate, 7 Mar 2014
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There must be about four good stories here - or could be. Given the length of the book (eight pages), this is a problem, since none are developed beyond ideas. The narration recapping events does not help either, killing any mood that might permeate despite the brevity. It is all what has happened in the past to get to his current situation, but we don't then see anything in the present after that.
So, some great ideas, but this needs expanding into a longer work, or better still,splitting into two distinct works (the honeymoon and events since).


Having Sex With My Neighbor's Wife: An Infidelity Erotica Story
Having Sex With My Neighbor's Wife: An Infidelity Erotica Story
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1.0 out of 5 stars Awful, 2 Mar 2014
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This is truly awful. Aside from the ridiculous price for it's length and simplicity (I got it while it was free), this is such poor writing. I don't like saying this and believe author's should be encouraged, but this is what gets erotica a bad name. The whole piece (note, only 5 pages as Amazon does say) is coincidental, but worse, comes across as if rapidly scribbled by a fourteen-year-old.


The Secretary Holds On
The Secretary Holds On
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5.0 out of 5 stars Simple fun, 22 Jan 2014
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This is well written and fun, though not possibly going as far as many would like. This is all about the teasing, not the actual wetting (though there are a couple of instances). A recommended purchase.


All In: Strip Poker Done Right
All In: Strip Poker Done Right
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5.0 out of 5 stars Recommended, 22 Jan 2014
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If there's one thing I avoid, it is following the crowd. A book has only great reviews, I want to amplify any flaw and give it a negative one. Or vice versa.
Bu this is different. I have to acknowledge the writing here. This is an engrossing read, with great mingling of gameplay and the unfolding private drama going on. It does lose a little when it goes beyond stripping to 'just' sex, but this is only relative.
A good purchase for me and I would happily buy more similar.


Banging Tammy 4: "The Counter Girl"
Banging Tammy 4: "The Counter Girl"
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1.0 out of 5 stars Avoid, 20 Dec 2013
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Unlikeable characters, especially the central guy, and appalling punctuation make this a poor release. An awkward read, this is disagreeable and truly nasty to women. Read to the end as it was so short, but it truly leaves an unpleasant taste in the mouth.


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