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Beach Ménage (Public Ménage DP Erotica)
Beach Ménage (Public Ménage DP Erotica)

3.0 out of 5 stars Not bad but not good value, 4 Jan. 2015
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Much shorter than the official 24 pages implies - double spaced with lots of gaps, as well as links and trailers - probably closer on 8-10 pages really and in need of fleshing out (if you'll excuse the pun). In particular, the ending is very abrupt, which is a shame as the rest is fairly well written and quite erotic. A warning to anyone scared of homoerotica - this has a line that is so throwaway you wonder why it is in there (it passes without comment, making it feel as if a biscurious subplot has been edited out).
So overall, a fun if frustrating read, 'purchased' when it was free and worth 99p/99c but totally not the current £2.28.


Naughty Ways to Play Normal Games
Naughty Ways to Play Normal Games
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1.0 out of 5 stars Very repetitive, 22 Nov. 2014
Great idea, but no depth to description or imagination. There is nothing in here you couldn't think of yourself if you know the basic game. Even the most obvious games are reduced to the most minimal gameplay that could be easily improved upon.


Pee Perverts: Drinking Her Own Champagne
Pee Perverts: Drinking Her Own Champagne
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars One of the best watersports stories, 22 Nov. 2014
If there is any complaint, it is that the story continues too long, the progression in danger of losing the focus as it moves from bathtime urine drinking to phone sex the next morning in what is largely a distinct story (despite a few timely references), surely with a mostly different audience.
That said, I fitted both targets if only expecting the first half. The level of description surpasses the usual standards of this genre, giving a perfectly plausible tale that was both taboo and erotic.


Menage A Spa (BBW Menage)
Menage A Spa (BBW Menage)
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1.0 out of 5 stars Didn't like, 22 Nov. 2014
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Only survived first 22%, finding it uninteresting, unlikeable and unlikely. Browsing forward showed no improvement. Sure, it has some plot, if you want slow erotica, but it wasn't a plasuable plot.


Grimm's Fairy Stories
Grimm's Fairy Stories
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5.0 out of 5 stars Enjoyable classics, 14 Aug. 2014
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Love the availability of classics such as these. Some of stories within I was completely unfamiliar with. Sure they're dated, but therein lies the charm. Great for adults and children alike, though not too young on the latter unless you're reading and ready to explain or reassure!


Captured by Cavemen
Captured by Cavemen
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4.0 out of 5 stars Something a little different, 1 Aug. 2014
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First part of longer story, but still includes some depth and several chapters. Well written, interesting and fun.
Note, I "bought" this while it was free; looking at the price of the sequels, I wouldn't rate it so highly if it was priced similarly. For the same reason, I haven't been tempted to read the rest of the story (and have docked it one star)


25 True Dogging Stories
25 True Dogging Stories
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1.0 out of 5 stars Too tame, too short, 1 Aug. 2014
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Mainly unerotic first person character pieces, often too conversational and little more than a shaggy dog story. Some rise above the rest, but still not to high levels. Don't expect anything too explicit - or long either, since some are under 1 page long.
This doesn't benefit from being marketed as erotica; it is far from that. It is a collection of fictitious short anecdotes lacking any depth to story or character that might be compiled into a TV documentary on dogging (suitable for immediately after the watershed).


Two Men for Me (bisexual threesome menage MF MM MMF erotic romance) (Mrs Harper'sValleys Book 1)
Two Men for Me (bisexual threesome menage MF MM MMF erotic romance) (Mrs Harper'sValleys Book 1)
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2.0 out of 5 stars Ruined by its editing, 16 April 2014
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This is not a bad book, just so poorly edited as to be hard to read, in particular, the dialogue. Often multiple speakers are in the same paragraph, then as the story progresses, a new pattern develops of 'X said,' then the dialogue follows in a new paragraph. Generally the prose is good away from any dialogue, though sometimes extends beyond the whole Kindle page and thoughts can be repetitive.
Apart from that, we have a fairly hot, if unconvincing bisexual (MMF) short story. Do I recommend it? Depends how patient you're feeling. I wouldn't read it again.


Sexy Slumber Party: A Group Sex Erotica Story
Sexy Slumber Party: A Group Sex Erotica Story

2.0 out of 5 stars Half a story, 7 Mar. 2014
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I love truth or dare; it is a great device in stories. Despite its short length (nothing wrong with that), this spends,a long time building the dares up, at one point all the girls taking turns to do the same dare. But then, trying not to give too much away, it stops with the next step and we are presented with a brief plan of what the girls intend to do next and what might happen when it gets back round to the central girl in the story.
One of those stories that is uncomfortably close to implying girls younger than eighteen (since all are so unbelievably innocent). There also seems a bizarre and incongruous play on the identity of the neighbour who joins them: "Rex" has very few lines and doesn't get any say in the truths or dares despite being close to them, is known as "Dog", growls and has shaggy hair!?!
So to sum up (and this review is becoming almost as long as the book), I felt uncomfortable at times during and cheated by the premature ending.


Cuckolded On My Wedding Night
Cuckolded On My Wedding Night
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2.0 out of 5 stars "Cuckolded on My Honeymoon and After" would be more accurate, 7 Mar. 2014
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There must be about four good stories here - or could be. Given the length of the book (eight pages), this is a problem, since none are developed beyond ideas. The narration recapping events does not help either, killing any mood that might permeate despite the brevity. It is all what has happened in the past to get to his current situation, but we don't then see anything in the present after that.
So, some great ideas, but this needs expanding into a longer work, or better still,splitting into two distinct works (the honeymoon and events since).


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