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The Laurie Bracken Trilogy ( Book 1) - The Eve of the Witch; ( Age 9, 10, 11, 12, 13)
The Laurie Bracken Trilogy ( Book 1) - The Eve of the Witch; ( Age 9, 10, 11, 12, 13)
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3.0 out of 5 stars good storyline but needs to be edited!!, 14 July 2014
I am so glad that I am reading this to my daughter as it means she isn't seeing the alarming amount of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. We have read a few in this series and they are all as bad - there are even instances where a character's name is wrong eg. Jack for Jake and also glaring mistakes like when a spell asks for a silver gown but then a few lines below the gown is described as gold. My daughter is at the stage where she's looking out for the next plot inconsistency ! Even a non professional goinv through these books coulc make most of the corrections. So please Tarin address these issues as the stories themselves are good


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