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THE UNEXPECTED HAS HAPPENED
THE UNEXPECTED HAS HAPPENED
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3.0 out of 5 stars requires more, 7 Nov 2013
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this book is something else, despite the spellings and grammatical issues, the story is quite a good one, the ideas behind it are very good and interesting.
Advise to the author: expand the conversations from basics of someone said this to this person and put in what was actually said, become more descriptive and perhaps flip from one person (in a camp) to another persons experiences in another camp in the next chapter from that persons point of view. Doing this would expand the book considerably and it can be done once the person has been introduced to a main character.
The basic ideas within the book are good and the concepts thrilling however although it did leave me wanting more, and for the book to be expanded the sentence structure left a lot to be desired and needed work. But with further editorial work to correct these issues it is more than accomplishable.


25 Simple Vegetarian Dishes
25 Simple Vegetarian Dishes

5.0 out of 5 stars good book, 7 Nov 2013
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got this book when it was free for a short time, has some good recipes in it, the apple chips though, needs further explanation that the apple needs slicing thinly or it goes soggy and not chip like.


Assassin's Creed: Black Flag (Assassins Creed)
Assassin's Creed: Black Flag (Assassins Creed)
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5.0 out of 5 stars great read, 7 Nov 2013
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i throughly enjoyed this book, it is well written, engaging and although it doesnt take the same general direction as the others quite as heavily as i initially expected it is a great read and i cannot wait for the next in the series.


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