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9 of 11 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Disappointing after Dragonbone Chair, 7 Jul 2003
By A Customer
I bought this on the strength of some of Williams's past work, which I have enjoyed. I did not think this was up to his usual standard. The main problem is the hero, Theo Vilmos. He is a thirty-year-old failing musician who lives in San Francisco, whose mother dies of cancer; he then finds a book written by his great-uncle which purports to be a travelogue of Faerie. But is the book fiction ...?So far, so good. The early sections of the novel are good - Theo here comes across as a realistic and sympathetic character, and the setting (which Williams obviously knows well) is well-drawn. These early chapters are interspersed with some from the points of view of various faerie characters. These also are good, up there with the best bits of Memory, Sorrow and Thorn. the problem for me comes when Theo enters faerie. He becomes a very passive character - he does almost nothing that isn't suggested or ordered by someone else. I cannot believe Williams does not understand that the main point of fiction is the choices characters make - Theo makes almost none. Since he is the character you are supossed to be identifying with, it makes the story a very uninvolving read. Also, Williams insists on telling us Theo's thoughts on everything - we are not allowed to observe faerie merely through his description, we also have to read Theo's reactions, which usually consist of comparing everything to aspects of modern life (often this is done in a very jokey way, which seems very inappropriate when Theo is in grave danger; in fact this robs the danger of any real bite). Finally, the book is way too flabby. (The same problem as with the later bits of Memory Sorrow and Thorn trilogy.) It would have been a lot sharper, and would have lost nothing, with 200 pages cut from it. By the end, the writing has lost its spark, and it feels like Williams is going through the motions to get it finished. Sorry, but all in all a very disappointing read.
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