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3.0 out of 5 stars
Reasonable book marred by errors and inconsistencies, 16 Dec 2002
What starts off as an interesting premise quickly becomes lost in a confusing plot marred by technical and chronological errors, as well as inconsistencies within the book. The apparent circumstances of the death of Ensign Alana Hart are not revealed until well into the book, other than fragmentory pieces here and there, which do not add up to much. Only a few pages on, what really happened is revealed, and the remaining plot strings are tied up too easily.The technical inaccuracies range from simple things like calling the scanners 'tricorders', - a name not yet mentioned in the television series - to saying the Enterprise has photon torpedoes on board, when at the time they are solely a Klingon invention, although the book jumps about between them being photon and fusion torpedoes on a couple of occasions, serving to confuse the matter more. The layout of the story is as a series of unexplained flashbacks that Lieutenant Reed is experiencing, dropped in at regular occasions, while he is in the days after Ensign Hart's death. However, these just serve to just keep the reader in the dark about what has already happened, until near the end of the story. The chronologial errors are at the transitions between these flashbacks and the present time, according to the television series, the Enterprise was first launched in April 2151, however the dates mentioned (apart from one log entry in the first chapter) are all December 2150/January 2151. Having said all that, if you can overlook all these points while reading, the book isnt that bad, and would probably be worth getting a 4 out of 5 rating.
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3.0 out of 5 stars
A decent outing, 2 Jul 2008
What Price Honor is a fairly decent and easy read, however it's brought down by some inaccuracies here and there.
The good things about this novel are that the characterisations are pretty good, especially that of Reed. In this respect, it's reminiscent of season two's Minefield, while making reference to a variety of season one episodes (notably Vox Sola, Desert Crossing, Detained, Silent Enemy and very vague continuity with Shuttlepod One).
Unfortunately, this accurate character depiction even spreads so far as to end up with Mayweather having no real lines outside of "yes, sir" and I imagine staring at the helm... which is a shame, but this story isn't about him.
The story, while clever, uses flashbacks as its main way of carrying on the story. As the other reviewer notes, this is riddled with inaccuracies as the dates given for chapter headings are late December 2150 and early January 2151 (a year into the mission), despite Enterprise only being launched in April 2151. Also there is this issue with scanners being called tricorders and mentions of photon/fusion torpedoes. These can be easily overlooked though.
The major downfall of this book is as it approaches the end. It gets quite dramatic and emotional towards the end, but literally within the last page, the entire episode is put behind them and off the crew go on their merry way, just as unaware Alana Hart existed as before the book...
Apart from this, it's a fairly decent read, with good pace and some good character development, although it would've been nice to see a little more involvement from Archer dealing with the first loss of a crewman (this happens in the series nearly a year after this book is set).
Much better than By The Book and hopefully puts the Enterprise books on the right track.
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