I've read lots of books about writing fiction. Although I studied creative writing at university level for several years, I'm not averse to reading books targeted at beginners because I can almost always learn something new. This book, however, was an exception. I looked at the author's website before ordering it and I had high hopes for it, but unfortunately it turned out to be one of the worst writing books I've ever read.
It starts with the assumption that the reader knows virtually nothing about writing fiction. This would not necessarily be a problem, but the author then tries to rapidly cover ALL the elements of writing fiction in a fairly short book. This approach means that a) nothing is covered in much depth and b) there isn't much space left to discuss YA fiction in particular. It would have been much more useful if she had focused on discussing what makes YA fiction distinct from adult fiction, and given recommendations for further reading on particular topics like plotting, characterization and point of view.
There are not enough detailed examples from published fiction to explain or demonstrate the author's points, and no discussion of current trends or authors, which means that readers who wonder what subjects might be controversial or overdone won't be able to find out from this book. Quotes from professionals are included, but these are too brief to be useful. It would have been really helpful to include more quotes from current writers in the field, and discuss how YA published now differs from YA published a few decades ago. A recommended reading list would have been good, too.
The book is really badly organised; much of the chapter on dialogue isn't even about dialogue! In this chapter the author covers narrative summary, misplaced modifiers, literary erudition, reducing the word count, getting critiques, and other subjects using examples from narrative, not dialogue. This chapter would have been better separated into two chapters, discussing dialogue and narrative style as different topics. As it is the focus of the chapter just seems to meander back and forth.
I started to get annoyed when the author explained the meaning of "Tom Swifties" and "said bookisms". By this point I felt I was being talked down to; the assumption seems to be that the person who's bought this book knows NOTHING about writing fiction. I also felt this book included too many lists and there were not enough references or recommendations for further study.
The book does include a brilliant quote by Ursula K. LeGuin in which she describes her concepts of "crowding" and "leaping" in fiction. I immediately wanted to read more, but frustratingly, Brooks doesn't give a reference so there's no way of knowing where this quote has come from!
Overall, I was very disappointed with this book and wouldn't recommend it at all.