The premise behind Steve Morris's book is simple but good: 'wired' words, ie words used on websites and in email, need to be more conversational, less full of marketese, less stuffy - because conversation is at the heart of interactivity. Unfortunately, there's not much more to it than that. The argument is repeated over and over again, fleshed out with examples, admittedly, but still very much overstated. My other gripe is that, despite using the Public Records Office in one of his case studies, the book seems to assume throughout that all websites are commercial or 'corporate' (what does that mean anyway?) and that the main aim of a site is to attract customers and sell to them (either goods or image). Not true. To rub salt in the wound, I spotted several incorrect apostrophes and spelling mistakes - not what you'd expect from a book that should appeal to online editors.