White is for Witching [Hardcover]

 

 

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I was looking forward to reading this novel as I thought it would be a kind of haunted house ghost story but it's much more complicated than I thought, although having said that it carries themes(witchcraft, spirits) that Oyeyemi touches upon in The Icarus Girl so it's not so surprising that she revisits these themes.
It charts the unravelling of Miranda Silver and her brother and father after the death of the mother, Lily. It is however told using the literary device of the moment: multiple narrators, which just seems to make it more confused and disjointed and means I never really cared about any of the characters.
Having said that it's not bad writing (it's just confusing) and where she mentions Dover it is at least realistic. If you liked The Icarus Girl you'll probably like this.

This novel covers the themes what readers should expect from this author, troubled family relationships, haunting, superstitions and unsettled states of mind; themes that one would expect wonderful things from certainly if you are a fan of the gothic and specially Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights.

The book is written is a slight naive elegant almost childlike fashion which is contrasted beautifully with the haunting feeling permeating throughout the book. This juxtaposition lays on the tension and uneasy feeling throughout.

The book is not brilliant but one feels that this is an author learning her craft and finding her voice. I would recommend this book if you want to see a contemporary author and you wish to go on her literary journey together. Let us hope that, if you wish to go on this journey, that it pays off. However, the book is subtle and it may take two reads, maybe more, for everything to come together.

I was very keen to read 'White is for Witching' - at face value, it looks like a curious, mysterious, quixotic novel with lots to offer. Sadly, it gets off to a bad start and gets worse. The book has a fairly vague premise, alluding to a girl who eats chalk and plastic, and who potentially went mad after her mother died (although the madness may have been caused by hitting her head on the fireplace) and themes of loss, memory, grief and alienation. It uses four or five different narrators - often within the same chapter - and follows the characters from their house in Dover to university and then back home again.

The start of the book is confusing, using four (or more) different voices to narrate, switching suddenly with little warning (often a word by itself in the middle of a blank line). It feels like an 'artsy' novel gone wrong - it tries to be clever without really succeeding. I felt like the tone was slightly awkward all the way through, putting me in mind of one of those books you read for English GCSE without really understanding it. For a while, I gave it the benefit of the doubt, believing that the author was using the tone to further the themes or feel of the book, but when you come across sentences like 'she wasn't angry, she was just being deontological' it's easy to lose any and all affection for the book. The narrative itself feels disrupted and the plot doesn't seem to develop or advance in any coherent way.

Sometimes it's quite hard to figure out what's going on in the book; it takes a while to figure out who is who, who is dead and who is alive, which country people are in, and what is going on. It's not particularly easy or pleasurable to read. Sometimes the events in the book feel very random, or thrown in to tick particular boxes; whilst the theme of grief does run quite well through the whole book, completely pervading some of the characters, other themes seem to be clumsily wedged in. There's a reference to alienation on the back cover (this may well change - I saw an uncorrected proof) but the only real episode where this comes to light is a case where one of the characters is alienated because they're mistaken for someone else!

A lot of the plot seems somewhat arbitrary and random - there's one particular part where a character goes into a bar, sees a guy she saw at school a few months ago and barely remembers the name of, kisses him and then leaves. He crops up a few more times, but it doesn't really have any lasting impression in the book, and serves no real purpose, aside from adding to the whimsical nature of the character in question. The book does seem quite spooky and mysterious sometimes, with the dead making regular appearances, but it's also quite incomprehensible, so you don't really know whether it's being mysterious or just poorly written. I'd recommend that the author reads something like Weaveworld by Clive Barker (where did Immacolata come from? etc.) or the Hyperion / Endymion saga by Dan Simmons (what is the Shrike? what happened in those 271 years?) to get an understanding of how to build and occasionally answer mystery, but still write clearly.

The book does improve in the second half when some of the characters go to university - it gets a bit easier to follow and slightly more satisfying to read - but only mildly. The book wraps up fairly inconclusively and unsatisfyingly; you're still left thinking 'why did I read this?'. In some ways, the style (but not the content) feels quite similar to Vellum by Hal Duncan - you can't quite decide for a while whether it's incoherent or brilliant. I'm sure the critics will argue over the book, in much the same way as people argued over whether Jackson Pollock created rubbish smears of paint on a canvas or works of creative genius. However, having read an interview with the author (on The Times website) she admits that she 'cannot account for everything that happens' so I'm more of the opinion that it's an incoherent mess of a book, and certainly not one I would recommend to anyone.

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2.0 out of 5 stars Haunting
I thought I was going to really enjoy this but found it hard work .
Maybe it was just me but I struggled to get into the style of writing. Read more

Published 3 months ago by C. Bridgen

2.0 out of 5 stars Confusing narrative
I was looking forward to this book. The cover conjurors up a story of a haunted house and lost spirits. However never judge a book by it's cover right? Read more

Published 5 months ago by Mr. J. R. Trinder

2.0 out of 5 stars Confusing and unsatisfying.
I was glad when I read the other reviews for this book that others had a similar experience of it as I had. Read more

Published 11 months ago by jakeena

1.0 out of 5 stars As bad as a book can get
When I first received this book about a year ago rather than read it and form my own judgement I instead read the reviews of it on Amazon. Read more

Published 15 months ago by Bantam Dave

3.0 out of 5 stars such promise, but........
I will not bore you with a synopsis, as other reviewers have made the effort to write some good ones. Read more

Published 18 months ago by geishagirl

5.0 out of 5 stars an enticing, even seductive read
i'm stunned i enjoyed this book so much. stunned because i never find contemporary novelist that impress me so much. ms. Read more

Published 22 months ago by Jodi Holiday

4.0 out of 5 stars An unusual but ultimately rewarding novel
Miranda Silver is a smart young woman about to start her first year at university. She also suffers from pica, an eating disorder which gives her an appetite for chalk, and has a... Read more

Published 23 months ago by A. Whitehead

3.0 out of 5 stars Weird, and partly wonderful
OK, where better to start than with a rant, eh? Why oh WHY has this trend for whimsical, naive book covers come along, set up camp and refused to move on? Read more

Published on 14 Feb 2010 by C. Askew

2.0 out of 5 stars White is for Witchling
This is apparently the authors third novel, I have never come across her before and to be quite frank I don't think I would read anymore if this effort is to go by! Read more

Published on 26 Jan 2010 by Clare

3.0 out of 5 stars The girl who ate chalk
There's something strange about Miranda Silver. She hides small pieces of chalk in her room and eats them when no-one is looking. She looks unhealthily thin. Read more

Published on 29 Dec 2009 by The Big Pink One

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