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Initial post: 8 Jan 2009 11:21:12 GMT
John says:
I need some help. And the people interested in cosmic ordering seem to be the best ones to ask. Can you tell me which version of my little ditty is better?
Is it

a)
Do the Chakra and Vac
and put the freshness back
Do the Chakra and Vac
and put the freshness back

Send large amounts of cash
to do the Chakra and Vac
send large amounts of cash
to the Chakra and Vac

When your Chakra is clear and you write your review
You had better give if 5 stars, nothing less will do.
If you try to criticise it will be reported as abuse
And Amazon will remove it using that as an excuse.

Or

b)

Do the Chakra vac
and put the freshness back
Do the Chakra vac
and put the freshness back

Send large amounts of cash
to do the Chakra vac
send large amounts of cash
to the Chakra vac

When your Chakra is clear and you write your review
You had better give if 5 stars, nothing less will do.
If you try to criticise, it will be reported as abuse
And Amazon will remove it using that as an excuse.

I think b is superior. Just seems to scan a bit better.

In reply to an earlier post on 8 Jan 2009 16:18:05 GMT
pango lynne says:
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In reply to an earlier post on 8 Jan 2009 16:32:20 GMT
John says:
Thanks, I agree

The final verse was going to read

When your Chakra is clear
Buy yourself a beer
And buy all associated comic ordering products from Stephen Richards in order to make him even more wealthy, just make sure that you leave a 5 star review or it will be removed.

The problem was the last lines didn't quite scan.

In reply to an earlier post on 10 Jan 2009 13:17:00 GMT
John says:
Can I just ask that instead of just pressing No on the button about whether the post adds to the discussion can you tell me which version is preferred? I don't know if the No is for a) or b).
Thanks

In reply to an earlier post on 4 Aug 2009 19:12:17 BDT
Poppy Flower says:
what was the question?
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