Although not an avid reader of military history, I found this book to be totally absorbing. When one thinks of the British involvement in WW1, it is usually only the Western Front in France that gets the attention - the other 'Fronts' are largely ignored. This book shows that the Western Front was not the only calamity - rank mismanagement and incompetence at all levels of Government and the Military led to massive and unneccesary loss of life in Mesopotamia too. However, the book would have been easier to follow if there had been more maps and diagrams to accompany the various battle narratives. The two maps near the beginning of the book deal only with the initial engagements. For the remaining three quarters of the book there are no such aids. So sometimes the narrative did seem to get a little 'bogged down' in detail. Also, it would have been helpful to me if the largely unneccesary 'List of Abbreviations' (I hardly ever referred to it) had been replaced with a 'Dramatis Personnae', perhaps giving 'thumbnail sketches' 2 or 3 lines perhaps)of the various Government and Miltary figures involved at the various stages of the book. I often found it difficult to follow where people fitted in exactly, where they came from, who they were in charge of exactly (and also who was in charge of them!) and how they inter-related. Names sometimes just appeared 'out of the blue' in the narrative without any background explantion of their role. Perhaps for readers already very familiar with the Mesopotamia campaign, this would be superfluous but to the new/casual reader this would, I think, be helpful in increasing the enjoyment to be gained from this read.